You already know my opinion!!!
this is so...lol I can't even describe..!
its so lovely written and the idea is so nice..you always come up with new ideas and thats wut I like the most ;)
gr8 work hun
Keep it up
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

Great use 0f wOrds in this piece. g0od j0b 0n it =] xx

lOve frOm
d0ra

Wow another brilliant write , good work.

I like that poem! Great work! I especially liked the end haha good job! GBU! Pepa oh and thanks for the comment on my poem!

Short, simple, deep yet meantingful. Awesome write yaar. I loved it.
"sleeping here with my own ashes and dust
visualizing you driving someone else insane"... Magnificent lines.

Love
Michelle

Oh my, what images!!

and yes, absolutely....there IS a difference!!
Strive On!

Awesome job!!! keep up the good work!! :)

Short but well written nice work!!! xox me

I don't really understand this poem. Butfor a tip to make it better, I suggest you capitalize the beginning of a line, and don't use the & sign. Just suggestions.

Catherin

2 stanzas written by Nitin = Ipsita heartbroken...

really.. that poem just broke my heart.. it touched me soo much... wow.. even with a few lines u really know how to make readers feel ur pain.......

5.5...... great write..

Much Love,
Ipsita

Nice Poem.5/5

Wow, this is realli gd, all ur stuff is fantastic =D xxx

Gosh! this poem reminds me how much I have missed reading your work!

very deeply symbolic - i think this poem has a lot of parallel threads running than the apparent.

great writing Nitin!

peace
shobhana

Wow, this poem is good..required a certain amount of reading over to catch the actual meaning but If you're really good at anazlyizing it catches up. It's a real good poem, keep it up.
-Sara

Strong one .

all the best

I m speechless.......kya likhte ho yaar...so deep
5/5
keep writing

This is absolutely amazing! Brilliant!

Nitin
Your poetry fascinates me. The images you paint with your words are awesome.

trying to find a difference between love & lust
as flashback runs behind my eyes again
sleeping here with my own ashes and dust
visualizing you driving someone else insane

Love the entire poem yaar.These lines really make one think.
Love Cindy