Awww this is just cute!!!
your poem is amazing I luved every part and stanza!
your poem was amazing, I swear I luved it with no doubt!! just you didn't hv to Capitalize the word Hell in the title!
but anyway its really gr8
keep it up
Um... I'm left absolutely
speechless after reading that
it was so dark and beautiful.
I held onto each word as I was reading
and got an image of the despair
and pain. I've always believed that earth is a glimpse of hell and this poem
really showed that.
I loved it. This was stunning!!
Great job!! 100/5 :)
Wow i am absolutely blown away by this amazing poem. Each time i read a poem of yours i am left speechless and always thinking. Your words are so haunting and remind me so much of my life and how i very often feel.
The Snake inside of me licked my purity,
it took me to my painful eternity
Don't save me, it will kiss away my pain
Tonight the sky will pour bloody rain.
this was my favorite stanza of your poem and just really made me think about the evil snakes in life, it really got me thinking of my brother wh o very tragically passed away 2 weeks ago due to a drug overdose, drugs were like the snake which took away his life and "kissed away his pain."
I have always been a huge fan of your writing and have always been in love with your stunning, dark and haunting style, you're amazing!!!! Keep it up cos you're really doing an outstanding job!!!!