Comments : From HELL to HELL

  • 13 years ago

    by Nee

    Awww this is just cute!!!
    your poem is amazing I luved every part and stanza!
    your poem was amazing, I swear I luved it with no doubt!! just you didn't hv to Capitalize the word Hell in the title!
    but anyway its really gr8
    keep it up
    Much Luv
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 13 years ago

    by Tormented

    Great poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's so dark... But it's so strong... I really liked it... Style of this poem is amazing... Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by Heba

    Wow. it is a great poem and there are strong expressrions. keep up5\5

  • 11 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Spectacular poem. Hell is such a strong subject for poetry.

  • 11 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Ashes to Ashes
    Dust to Dust
    A world full of Sin,
    Betrayal, and lust.

    Great write from poetry Knight

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    This poem called out to me just by the title. I am glad to know that it wasnt a mistake. I loved the look into the dark world. It was amazing. Keep up the good work.

    5/5

    With Love,
    -Ally

  • 11 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This is a reallly good poem I love it
    keep up the asome work

  • 11 years ago

    by adriaan

    Pretty good! I need to do more poems like this.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Um... I'm left absolutely
    speechless after reading that
    it was so dark and beautiful.
    I held onto each word as I was reading
    and got an image of the despair
    and pain. I've always believed that earth is a glimpse of hell and this poem
    really showed that.
    I loved it. This was stunning!!
    Great job!! 100/5 :)
    ***Take Care***
    Love shell

  • 11 years ago

    by Yeka

    Dude this poem is so dark and pure that's coming in your heart love it (^_^) I'll add this in my fav 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul London

    Wounds of my poisoned heart
    will show my tears in the dark part
    The endless hate of my life
    will give me itself the knife

    Really great stanza, This is what I call reaching deep inside and purging out to the surface.

    I Look forward to reading more. You have a talent for finding a way to make the words come together.

  • 11 years ago

    by alone

    Nice this is really cool

  • 11 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow i am absolutely blown away by this amazing poem. Each time i read a poem of yours i am left speechless and always thinking. Your words are so haunting and remind me so much of my life and how i very often feel.

    The Snake inside of me licked my purity,
    it took me to my painful eternity
    Don't save me, it will kiss away my pain
    Tonight the sky will pour bloody rain.

    this was my favorite stanza of your poem and just really made me think about the evil snakes in life, it really got me thinking of my brother wh o very tragically passed away 2 weeks ago due to a drug overdose, drugs were like the snake which took away his life and "kissed away his pain."

    I have always been a huge fan of your writing and have always been in love with your stunning, dark and haunting style, you're amazing!!!! Keep it up cos you're really doing an outstanding job!!!!
    love
    shellaine