Hey Alex Que paso? Well I liked ur poem its hard to get over someone when first u were friends then bf and gf. So I see ur point in the poem. But holla @t me at CrazyMexicana05@yahoo.com Peace!
JackieOXOX

Your poem is so great
That what I feel like
I wish I could write as good as you
Well good luck writing!!

Thats so sad :[

I really liked this. I definitely know how you can feel and your poem really made me feel the sadness again, but it was really good.

Short and too the point. Just for you, you should capitalize I and you wrote "their" when you should have written "there"...I gave it a {5/5} but it prolly deserved {4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Good poem. IT was 4/5, but you are good at writting, so 5

Hmm.. This wasn't as good as the other one. Some of the lines seemed a little messed up. I liked the message behind it though. It was good. Keep writing. 4/5 Sorry.

`Taleee xx