Wow..u really painted a picture..that was amazing 5/5

Wow way deep abd beautiful your descriptive words make it easy and enjoyable to read i can like actually see it GREAT JOB
keep the faith keep the talent and keep the ability to write so beautifully

-laura

Loved the poem was like i was there 5/5

I sincerely love this poem. You have a very intriging and thoughtful way with words. I love the image that you created with this piece. Great job!

Wow... this was really good... its almost like i was there in that place
beautiful write
5/5
love
amy
ps-hey u dint tell me if in the poem... it was murder or suicide...
let me know