Hey girl thanks for commenting on my poems i like your all of them this one is one of my favorites though. GOOD JOB

Wow. this is good!
thanks for commentin on my poem! and i had fun responding to your posts =]
Lauren

I like this again this is rly awesome ur a very good poet keep up the good work 5/5

Her life would swiftly disappear.
So pointless, sad and lonely,
And when she spoke, no one would hear.

That was my favorite stanza in the whole poem. I liked the poem, but I didn't love it.. Nothing seemed to stick out to me. Sorry.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

WOW THIS POEM IS REALLY GOOD MAN YOU SURE CAN RIGHT I KNOW WHAT YOUR FELING AND THINKING IIN THIS POEM IVE BEEN THERE I GIVE IT A 5

Such a true poem, really it is. Everyone should live life to the fullest, never know what could happen..

I like this, it tells a nice story with a good rhythm to it. I think you could work the layout of it a bit so it is more even, that should improve the flow. Also, I think "to fast" should be "too fast" Take care
Polly