Really nice poem to read and i think it flowed very well. By reading it, it looks like you put a lot of emotion into it which I thought worked really well,

dave x

Wow, I love this poem. It all went together really nicely. It sounds like you put a lot of feeling into your poems. It's almost like your letting your heart seep out onto paper. Thank you a bunch for leaving a comment on my poem as well, i really appreciate it!
- Johanna