Aw.. that is really sad and sweet. It sounds like it came straight from the heart. You did a great job on this!

This is a very good poem. it describes perfectly how im feeling. i dont know y someone rated it a 3. it deserves a 5!!!!
xoxo

A good one but u should have worked more on it . am trying to say that you could say more to depcit that feeling.i wish u all the best in the future.

amanda