5/5 poem, please check out mine as well, thanks

I like it, its good. The form is interesting, youll learn I am all for unique forms of poetry. Theres a few spelling errors. You want to say Bored, not Bord. lol And you put "conner" store, I assume you mean "corner". Besides that its good. {4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Good job 5/5

This was a really good dedication, it's just that, it became a bit repeatitive. Keep writing though.

I like how in the end, you answered a question from the begining.
another good poem!
I am wondering what happened to Megan though...
good poem though!!