YAY! I'm the first to comment on this. =D

A really great poem, You worded it wonderfully to fit in with the patten you had to do. I swear your poems are getting better each time you post one. Keep writing. I'll be sure to keep commenting your poems since your not going to be going in the read/comment forum. Keep it up. 5/5

`taleeee xx

Fantastic Kaylee. I am in awe of your talent.

the words bright misery are brilliantly coined, your mastery of the language is superb.
It is a pleasure to read you my friend.

good luck and peace
shobhana

Two Words.. Omg Wow!
I adore it Haha. It's such a cute and well written poem. Ohlordy. I seriously think this is my favorite one. It's wording and flow are amzing. Wonderful Wonderful write.

You write very good pieces in prescribed forms. A love this one, so wonderfully done. wording was ingenious, enjoyable read.

Kaylee, loved the poem. "Cold metal tin Man" super line(s). Excellent Nonet.

Great poem, I loved it!

xoxoxo Haley

I like this....mysteriosu yet obvious.....cool

Good job Kaylee!
It's hard writing poems with restrictions on it, but you did a great job. Very good story too, reminds me of the Wizard of Oz. Good stuff.

Ahhh holy crap.

That's one of the best nonets I've ever read.

Sorry. You've recieved a few comments from me, and I don't normally comment like this, but everything about this poem struck me in a fantastic way.

I've tried writing a nonet, but the syllable restrictions make it very difficult for me to feel descriptive. This poem didn't have any problem with that, and not only used a great deal of creative diction, but also great metaphors and symbolism...

Wow, that's a good poem. Makes me wish that I voted 5's less so that this 5 would be more special, sorta lame on my part actually.

Interesting choice... a little Shakesperian lol... it was different... i'm not quite sure what the nonet is so i'm probably just a little confused that way... but good poem