Aww. Thats so nice, Sad but nice. The flow and rhyming were alright. But the message you had behind it was really strong. So 5/5

`taleee xx

Wow, at the beginning, kinda reminded me of the situation that i am in with my dad right now, but then as i read on, i caught ur message and it was very strong. Keep up to good work darling. :)
-Jenna xo

Really good i liked it

Wow thats so sweet and awsome i loved the way you described how u felt lots of emotion going on in that poem i loved it xoxroxyxox

I love this poem like the other you really must love both your parents so much

That was very good, i really love my dad too.

Awww that sso cute hunnie
u put alot of effort in this 5/5
xoxroxyxox

This is a really dute. Keep up the good wrok 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

This poem is sad. Did that really happen too you? I loved the way you showed how much you care about your dad that is really sweet.. Keep up the good work.

sara