This poem hit home for me... a true sad and depressing poem but et you have a hint of hope in it. I liked reding it though I ahev read a lot of poems along the lines of yours... yours was one of the great ones I read.

Arigatu gozaymasu for the comment on my poem. hontony arigatu

Very good. I loved the line "But I know that your there, just incase..." sometimes thats all that matters not telling your friend what is wrong but knowing that you could if you felt like it.. nice job.

What a great way of sharing ur feelings, every word made so much of sense, great write indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

I really liked this poem hunnie - you are allowing to express everything in such a sad manor.. but yet expressing a tad of hope - great write keep up the good work

I can't believe this is how you feel about it...I don't know how to make you see what I see/feel. I don't want something bad to happen to you, cuz I know its going to if you don't see. Your breaking my heart...

I really really love this poem. Your a better poet than I am! Keep up the good work, really. You get my five.

Aww.. this was good.. the title really draws the reader in and this poem really showed what and how you were feeling.. great emotion used and it flows pretty well.. nice job! 5/5

This is really deep and good. AWesome work
~KaTiE