Aw. This really touched me. Made me think about a few things. Really good poem. With a great message, And it's sad. Buuuuut. Awesome. Tehe. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Aww Boo!! this is an extreamly sad poem, but a topic that can touch all of its readers. death truly is a sad thing, but..just as you wish for them to remember the good times, you do the same. dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. death is part of the cycle of life, and we cant change it.

Hey! it's a relli nice poem! well its relli bad when sum1 u love dies. n we r lucky dat no 1 we love has died! awesome poem tho.

I dont think this depressed me because it was very well written and was kind of asking things i once wanted tro know the answers to.
well worded and flowed well too
love Taraxxxx

Aww this is so true. i like it a lot. its very good but sad. keep writing

So true, just so beautiful and sad-when you work out why people die please tell me because i've been struggling with this question for a long while. Good writing here

Sondos

This is an exisite and touchong poem
i understand how you feel.. losing some one is so hard....
i hope your ok:)
my fav lines are
"We will never ever forget them
And all the beautiful memories
They gave to us.."
so awesome
5/5
catch

I really liked this poem, packed with a lot of emotion. So sad..

I can answer that question..
Because we all have to die sometime.

Jessy...You know what...you are right....i dont get it too!! its just not fair!!! But still i love the poems that you right with true feelings..they just sound very nice...I LOVE IT!!

You had me at the first stanze but by this line:
To no longer
Hear their laughs
To never again look into their eyes
And tell them we love them..
I was in tears, I lost my mom & all these things are starting to fade
Amazing poem! from an amazing writer

Very sad poem Jessy, I'd like to know why people have to die to, but I guess it's life and that's what happens. But anyway. I really loved it. I agree with Philly aswell. I"m going to enjoy reading the five more poems I need to comment. ;)

Awesome work! really good. 5/5 heartfelt!

Awesome work! really good. 5/5 heartfelt!

I agree...it expecially sux wen the person did nothing to die..anyway..very easy 2 relate 2..5/5
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Great this is really good

I love it. i want 2 no y people die 2

I love it. i want 2 no y people die 2

Great poem, really emotional

sarah xx