I liked it, it was a bit short for my liking but still well written. keep writing
love tara xxxx

Wow this is great I am feeling the same way . Boyfriends sux! Great poem

Ally

Nice poem i like how you repeted in it not may poem sound good with it but yours did nice job keep it up

I liked it. I went through this w/ many friends and a few boyfriends. When i first read the repetition I was thinking it was going to get old, but it didnt. You made it work! Great writing!

Great Structure! I liked how this poem is unique, the layout and some of the words... it was brillant. I loved how you transitioned, and I loved how it was expressed. I love it! Great Job, 5/5

Excellent job on this. I don't usually like repetition poems, but this one was really good. I loved it because it's something that I am somewhat going through right now. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to read more from you!

Wow. i like this one, it is powerful.
5/5

I liked the style of this one better. It got the point across and put a lot of enphasis when you repeated the lines. I enjoyed that part the best. 4.