Short but its really good. keep writing

U see its so simple yet very meaningful i like it alot very good job. ive got new 1s and id like 2 knoe ur opinion

I can so identify that.

great poem!

thanks for the comment!

xoxoxoxoxox

I totally love this...cause sometimes it seems like everyone only wants you to be wrong and mess up...great job!

This poem is awesome. I love it. Thank you for reading my poems.

I know how that feels. But, I always say what goes around comes around twice as hard. It has always been proven to be true. Keep your head up! 5/5! Nice Job!=)

Ooooh nice...but try not to use improper words such as "ain't". it makes the poem sound unintelligent. other then that, excellent work!

I love this one, because I can relate to it. I love the poems that don't have a lot of words, but mean so much. Great job. =]