Ive never read anything like it........ I LOVE IT! I see what you are getting at and the way you say it is extremely powerful! Im heading to read more of yours!

Hi Chelsea,

I am glad to har that you like my poetry, and wishing you to enjoy my other pieces, which I believe you can find another better ones

Thank you for your reasonable comments.

sfiawong.

Welcome members/friends to make frank critique on this poem, and also want all of you can understand this poem and follow its hints for the poetry field. Go to plant your piece of poetry garden, let it haing gotten prosperous again as good as the ancient poetry world.

sfiawong.

The roots of poetry may be hazed, but not forgotten. Like a tree, it has many branches, what we see is above the earth, but hidden under the soil, lies the roots of the tree, the tree that gives poetry life. It's good you keep your Chinese values, rather than conforming to Western Society.

I had 2 give this poem a perfect 5 despite the bad ratings this poem was gettin because many didnt try to vizualize what u were tryin to say. very well written and beautifully organized