Wow....i felt that one...great poem

That was a really emotional poem, which obviously had a lot of thought went into, I thought you did a great job

well done

dave x

Omg i loved that its amazing u put alot of effort in this i loved it i could feel the pain and anger running through me i felt my heart beat geting stronger
i loved the last stanza i loveeeee it so good one of the best youv made i apsolutly enjoy your poems
xoroxyxox

Excellent poem! I'm really impressed! Nice style of writing... And it's ends so well... Great work!

That was an awsome descriptions keep up the work

AWW HOW SAD... KOOL POEM THO :)