This was amazing! Loved the 3rd stanza. Really great write. =] 5/5

`taleee

What a wonderful, hopeful write Bill... How I've missed your poetry. I hope we are going to see more :)

...."Let my Spirit forever fly"......

a fine delivery...........

Wonderful words of wisdom, written with eloquent grace that comes only with experience.

it's wonderful to read your work again.

good luck and peace always
shobhana

I like your style of rhyming, with the 1 and 3 line and the 2 and 4 line. This is the first poem on this website that contains a rich vocabulary. It's very refreshing!

I like it a lot...keep it up

[PygmyPuff]