Deep
congratualtions on coming 1st in my comp.
youre a very talented writer i can see from your work that its well thought and well constructed together, with meaning and you use these qualities in each of the pieces ive already read.
i seem to think ive read or heard of your name befor....hmmm

well keep up your great pieces of art and ill continue to read
~Emma
5/5

This really shows your connection with Nature. I liked you you expressed it... it was just, great. Nothing more, nothing less, it was just Perfect. A vivid imagination of what you are describing... nicely done.

Wow short yet crammed full of details. 5/5
#2

Nice job, reminds me of something else...lol

Great Job, like ~*Who Cares?*~ said it was short but crammed full of details!!! Very good Job!! I like the form of poetry you used!!! Very nice Job.. Couldnt change a thing!! 5/5!!