Far out!
this is an awesome poem!
i love all ur dark poems!
well bye bye'mwah courts
=)

Wow this is really good dear

Gone and left in the past,
An innocence stolen to young,
Taken away to early,
By your harshly spoken tongue

i really liked this stanza as i could relate to it so well

all the best and take care
5/5

Gone and left in the past,
An innocence stolen to young,
Taken away to early,
By your harshly spoken tongue

i know how that feels keep up the good work it was deep