Hey, quite a unique poem, I enjoyed reading it and I could relate to it well

well done

dave x

Very well expressed I liked the way it was so easy to read and the words trickle down the page
good job
much love
Aaron (remo) xxx

Aww, Thats so sweet. Tehe >.< I kinda wish I could feel like this. But again, A wonderful job. I love your poems so much. There all so good. You're very talented! Keep writing okayy =P 5/5

`taleee xx

I love this poem... i know what its like to be in love and miss someone so freakin much that it hurts.... very unqie technique for this and i love the way it was "chopped" up. great job definately a 5/5 -Jen-

Its quick and choppy which usually makes a boring poem, but this has spirit and I enjoyed it. I can say I relate very much. {5/5}

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