Awwe, very good! I loved how the words played off of eachother! this poem made me very happy! try checking out some of my stuff!

Jerbear*

Thanx, i will check out you stuff

Awwww, thats such a sweet poem. made me smile

dave x

This is the best 1 sis, lv claire xxx

*hugs* thanks for all your comments guys, its appreciated

sarah xxx

This poem is amazing lol. It's so sweet and said with such a pure heart, I love it! =)