Great work, Tim!

I'm speechless... The feelings this evokes are just overwhelming.

Timothy, such a sad poem once again, but wow, how you took those verses and made them fit, I hope to write like this someday. I enjoyed reading this. Take care, Denise

T, I think that this is bloody excellent...pardon my expression...It's marvellous...im totally amazed.

Ok so i have never read any of your poems and i am shocked this is probabbly one of the best poems i have ever read, honest, i have never seen that kind of poetry before like the style of it i loved it and i cant wait to see what else you will write thank you for letting me read it.

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

This was such an evocative and touching poem!!! A beautiful use of the form, with a wonderful flow. I loved it, simply amazing ^_^
Amour,
Kim