Comments : Brown eyes look at me

  • 17 years ago

    by firexflys

    Nice job like how you wrote it and how deep you got in it keep it up 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by See Through Silouette

    That poem was amazing and i can relate somewhat..haha. You have a real talent. Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Hmmm.... feels great to be stared at by gorgeous eyes, doesnt it? Well this poem shows so much love and longing, I do hope you get those brown eyes to be yours forever. Keep smiling.

    Love
    Michelle