You're a gifted writer. I like this poem, it kind of shows that you truly don't know what you have until it's gone. Kepp writing. I look forward to more poems.

I just can't get over this poem... it affects me in a really strange way. it hits me sraight in my heart, bcuz it shows how foolish that boy truly was, until he lost it all... you are very gifted.

Thanks.. i wrote it at one of those moments where it feels like your world collapsed..but i changed the perspective, because perception is everything.... im glad that it affects you like that, thats the goal of my poetry..to touch on things in a way that is understood..

Thanks for the critique.. advice is always appreciated..