Very very nicely done
i love how you tied in two concepts and kept them intertwined in your poem to sort of illistrate how u feel when you are that confused and sad. it sort of shows the reader that everything just comes so fast

i really like the last line

xoxo

Wow. You really outdid yourself on this one. Fantastic poem. :)

Man that truely is deep, i dont want to just say "nice way of putting it" it seem to me that doesnt do justice to that poem... But yea, i dont want to sound like one of those guys that just likes the way it sound it has great meaning...