Ok i think im now going to be scared of clowns lol....I love this poem it left me in suspense tell the end.

Mallori

Wow..u just made me more scared of clowns...im deathly afriad of them...not cool....but it was a great poem keep it up girl
Xox Laura aka Sweets

I like the ending.
very enchanting
except theres some things you need to work on.
Your rhythm is a bit off and some words could have been better.

4/5

Odd poem, but very well written
5/5
good job
~sTEVIE