Raw emotion.
very nice work.
~Emma

This is good, sammi, great job!

Great words sammi keep it up xox me

Loved the choice of words.. and I love how short it was. .nice work

Thanx for the comment! I love this poem! you use so many good words and emotion! i can tell you wrote this from the heart. Its beautiful! your such a fantastic writer! ash xo

Awwwwww baby im neva gona leave u alone......ill always be there to bring that shining brite smile to ur face and ur life....love ya

nami

Well you really succeeded in drwaing dark and blue pictures caused by depression.

all the best