*fake swedish accent*

You are feeling sorry for the oil lamp? Zhat is because you are cressy. It has no feelings! Besides, the new one is much better!

*Sigh*...good times, good times...

I like the last line the best. It's like a look into the private lives of lanterns...

Oooh! Ideas!

*Close-up of James Lipton*

Tonight, on Inside the Actor's Studio, we talk to the kitten inside the lionskin. Please join me in welcoming...Kerosene Lamp!

And you call yourself a kook...

You. never. cease. to. amaze. me.

Intresting it is diffrent and it gives me ideas for new things as far as the style I liked it and I love the the last two lines I never thought of writing poetry in this way its wonderful

I love it !

flawless and beautiful not corny or anything!!! perfect and a totaly unique idea i don't know what else to say!

Whow awesome poem, great use of words!! it was touching and sophisticated at the same time!!! Loved it..
Xx

I really like the imagery in this one :)
and the last line is like a "woah" moment
nice :)