Short poem, But, I liked it! Yup I did!
Theres only 3 stanza, So it's hard to pick a favourite. But it was an overall great job. Had a good message behind it, And I could relate a little. Keep up the good work! 5/5

`Taleee xx

I think this poem would improve a bit if you didn't use the word 'past' so much, it just seemed to clog the poem up with its nonstructured repitition. Besides that, good poem. I liked the first stanza the most because it seemed the most specific, and it gave the poem originality and character.