Aw wow. Thats sad. =[ Really good though! Just sad. Keep it uppp 5/5

`Taleee xx

Very sad, but very well written. Why do you write such depressing poetry? Is it just the kind you like to write or are these from life experiences....If so, just remember to never give up hope:) Great job!

I liked it. I can definitely connect. I really like your rhyme scheme. 5/5 keep it up.