wow! i agree absolutley brilliant but painfully sad also! well done you certainly captured alot of emotion there! hayley xx

Wow :-(, that was really sad, I have many many may poems about this kinda abuse, i would really like u to check them out acutally, they're more on like the 3 or 4th page, sorry i have alot! :-) I really enjoyed this poem and I hpoe you write more oon this topic, it needs to be out in the open!

thanx so much for your opinions on my poems.it means alot.