Great poem i gave it a 5 keep up the good work!!!

Kevin

This is your best poem i really love this one keep up the good work.5/5.

Great poem. i liked it. keep it up
dee

NICE!!!!!

This was a good poem. i think you could have put a lil more emotion in it instead of worrying about rhyming. rhyming should be ur last concern. poems are about the heart. good format though.

Wow, I know how you feel. Loved this poem; it was amazing. 5/5.
Much love, Emma xx

Hey babe lovly poem keep it up

Very good nice beat

lissa

Gr8 poem I love It I give you a 5/5!!!!!
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