Awsome!!!!
Really cool... you've got talent, keep it up :)

Wow.. you are very talented.. this was an amazing poem, it contained so much emotion and was just so dark! the flow was good and so were the descriptions! very nice write! 5/5

Fantastic... you're right it is unique, but amazingly well written with some interesting and well portrayed ideas and great descriptions

You should edit this poem yourself.
First verse, "up wards" should be 'upwards'.

Second verse, "they" not 'the'.
Third verse, "dare to even care" take out the 'dare' because it didn't flow.
Fifth verse, "As the" not 'as they'

That was about it... this was a really good poem. I liked the story, and it was indeed creative. You managed to create very vivid images for your readers with the words you chose. You described everything well. Although this poem was long, the flow was great, and it was enjoyable to read. Awesome stuff.

All i can say is that this poem was definitely worth reading.

I don't want to sound too repeditive. But this was really good. And yes it was long, But it was great! Really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee xx

A really unigue poem, i like your style of writing

^sorry me and my typos, lol i meant unique

"Your my little puppet now my dear."
It should be you're
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"For Yet..I must tell you.. I am the Devil And This Is My Garden You See?"
I think the line should read 'I am the Devil and This is My Garden, You see?' with a comma separating, 'you see'
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This was a good story poem, and kept me interested throughout.

Nice story poem.. tho i would change a couple of things..like the line "For Yet..I must tell you.. I am the Devil And This Is My Garden You See?" i would make it more understandind.. but other than that nice job... love your work!

Once again, you have a great talent in creating imagry. i think this poem had the opertunity to be even longer, for we never found out why this angle was sent to hell. the raining blood was a fantastic idea, and the repatition of the devils voice worked really well

Ruby

I really like ir way of writing!!!! enjoyed this poem, long, but good.

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This Poem Is Extremely Unique.. Great But Not Excellent. I Think It Could Have Been A Little Bit More Detailed. I Mean, If It's Going To Be Long, You Might As Well Have The Reader Feel As If They Are There, Witnessing It. I Couldn't Really Picture The Surroundings That Well, Or See The Devil In My Mind.

4/5 Just The Same.

xoxo

xLauren3

You're poems are so unique and tey are so dark and this poem was perfect, it was long but it made me want to carry on reading and not oce did i loose that feeling
well done
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Wow... very touching... that pome was enchanting..it is amazeing. never stop writeing you are so talented...

I loved the Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!