Aww this is really good,,
i wish my "dad" could hear it....

...{oOo}...leah...{xXx}...

This is a great poem, You should write more, about mum's and how they are so cruel!

This is such a sweet poem. i shall dedicate it to my dad.heh heh.good work.xoxo

Thank You all 4 the comments I really get inspired lol thank You
-Audrey