Once again I gotta give you a 5/5 for this wonderful poem. Its very sad for someone to feel like this but you have to write how you feel. Your second to last stanza means a lot to me.
If only they listen or ever care
if only someone attempted to - if only they dare.
That is a really powerful line becuase some friends just look over the fact your in depression, but once agian you've done a good job.