Comments : Not My Story

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Tnx fr alwys bein der hun
    it was brilliant
    lve u loadz
    xmwahx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    I dunno why I REALLY wanted to read your poem!
    I wasn't really intending to read any poems cuz I'm already sleeping in front of my pc,lol!
    this poem was really amazing!!!!!!!
    I loved how it rhymed and the meanings were so nice!
    the unrhymed stanzas were awesome indeed!!!!
    I totally love it hun & I dun regret readin it too =)
    take care
    NemO x0x0x0x0x

  • 17 years ago

    by Nada

    Awwwww

  • 16 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    Aw... I think the only thing that makes this more "meaningful" (as you said what you were going for) is that, even though this isn't -your- story, you still seem to understand what the speaker is going through. Lovely write~

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I love the poem and it's words are all to true for me, I'm actually going through a similar situation right now. The flow was great and the imagery as well, I enjoyed the way the poem was written and your choice of words. Excellent job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very well written as far as free verses are concerned. The flow is nice plus its very very meaningful. Keep up the good work 5/5 doubtless