Hey sweetie.. so full of promise.. Hope you don't mind a correction.. the words 'to' on two consecutive lines should be spelt 'tpp', as you use it to mean 'aswell'.. Other than that, I love the innocence of your poem. Well done. xx

This was a sweet poem
but I think you shud split the poem into lines and stanzas
it'd be easier for the writer to read, cuz you know some ppl are very lazy to read a poem like this! hehe
Don't feel offended because the poem overall is very sweet, I can relate also =)

I'll keep commenting on your poems after I'm done with my exams
and I want to thank you for your beautiful comments, you really made my day!
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x

**for the reader to read!
I'm dumb,lol =D
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