Comments : Unbreakable Silence

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, This was really good. A little sad. But really good. I loved it! 5/5

    `Taleee xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh Chelsey!! you wrote a wonderful poem! I really liked the rhymes.
    "Silence is her favorite song" I thought that was cool. This is your 200th poem!
    woohoo congrats :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    That was such a beautiful poem, the flow was great. I am very impressed.
    The poem was very effectual way of bring the reader into the life og a lonely old woman.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    I like the truthful approach in this poem. Age is something we all have to face, you've portrayed the life of an aged woman very well!!