This is my favorite i really like how you worded it you put a lot of detail l8r and out

I really like this poem, i like how you used your words! I like that it's very descriptive!

Hey amazing poem. great choice of words. keep it up...
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Is this me it me or is this about a bird or is there a hidden message cause the hidden message is pretty well hidden

WOW! how can the rating for that be 3.7?? that should be 5.0! that was really great! i loved how the words just seemed to trickle down the page and the descriptions and rhymes were excellent! truly great write! 5/5

Your use of words were great :D poem wasa pleasure to read :)

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Two things... "king's" instead of "kings" and "dog-gone" instead of "dog-gawn".

I really like the imagery in this one. It's awesome. :)