This was so good. I loved the last stanza. Spesh the part that says, "She watched her fairytale ending, Be torn apart." I loved it. Awesome write! 5/5

`Taleee xx

I love this poem, it seems to have so much truth and emotion into it, you really got your feelings out on this one, good work hun, please check out some of my poems and comment on them to let me know what you think, it would be greatly appreciated.
love cass xoxo

Thats a really amazing poem. so many emotions expressed. i love it. keep up the good work your a great writer.

Very well penned. Conveyed a lot of emotion, and a very strong ending as well. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)
-Jenna xo

This was avery strong poem. I know how you feel and you did an excellent job expressing it. You have a great talent. wonderful poem. keep your chin up :).