Wow. I love the first three stanzas. There is like a million times more emotion in this single poem than in most other poetry. I hope it's a bit exaggerated, you should worry about making yourself happy, not somebody else. But either way, it's a great poem and you should show it to the person you wrote it for. 5/5.

First stanza, last line "For you I long"
that seemed force. I know you were trying to keep the rhyme scheme going, but that messed up the first stanza.

The rest of the poem was great though. I enjoyed it. Not bad for someone who calls me 'boi' lol

5/5

Wow mia.. nice job.. sometimes i wonder the same things... hope he loves you to.. miss ya!