This was really good. For a non-rhyming poem, I thought you did a great job on it. I really like those last two lines aswell. They stood out the most to me. Keep it up =P 5/5

`Taleee xx

Very good poem, it was sad, and I enjoyed reading it. I agree with what Talee said aswell. :)

Aww.. that is soo sad! excellent work! it has a lot of emotion, a good flow, and is not too long! great write! 5/5

Hey a really emotional poem. thought it was very deep and very creative. Thanks for the comment aswell

dave x

Great poem...sad though...but but beautiful work!!!....so deep and touching!!...loved it!
Kp it up!5/5!
xxPoojaxx