Great! it was so realistic! what made you write this? try checking out some of my stuff.

Jerbear*

Oh my gosh!!!!! yeah i do like it... no wait u don't like it I LOVE IT! omg it is soooo great omg omg omg lol yeah you need to know how amazing this is. i wasn't gunna tell the guy i like that i like him but it turned out that he liked me too so know we're both way happy... ahh! i love it!!!!!!! 5/5

I love your poem and how you made it from two point of views. Its realistic and it seems like a real diary entry.GOOD WORK getting ur point across