Aww very cute and moving
really moving
great work, keep it up
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

I really really like this poem. It gave me goosebumps! and it made me cry. I'm sorry that you lost someone that seems to have been so close to you.
wonderful poems
keep it up.
5/5
love,
Lucy

Dats 1 of the best poems ever it nearly made me cry really upsetin

Whoa, that poem was very deep. You write beautifully, I could feel your pain. You are a very passionate poet, keep going.
Love,
Steph

Hey, I loved the poem. It was really ddep. I feel your pain. I lost someone too! Keep it up, cant wait to read more of your poems!