Really like it!! :]

I like your poem, its very good
*~Brittany~*

So very sad and true a part of life we all must face and fight and many do not win, It is a very well written piece, my only point of criticism would be it does not flow very easily due to the timing in the words but the visuals and the pain of the message are well accented please keep writing :)

The pain is so excellently foregrounded in this poem. congrats on such a well written poem, i offer my best wishes. keep writing, u have such potential,
xxx

When i wread this poem i feelt what u were wrighting like i was doing what u were saying thank you for that i will be looking fored to read more of u work if u wish u can add me on msn my_cuts_are_bleeding@hotmail.com

by matt