OOoooOOOooo.. Scawy.... DunDunDun.

But I Don't Really Love It As Much As Your Others-Sorry. I Have To Honest((You Tell Me Not To Lie!!!)
If I Could I'd Rate 4.5 But I Can't So I'll Go 5.

XoXo

Lauren

Im so much amazed of your poem and i can relate

TURTLE Turtle Turtle Turtle Turtle Turtle

lol I think this poem is very well written, but there are a few grammatical errors involving capitalization. You should fix them then the poem will be very nice.

[PygmyPuff]

An unusuaul twist at the end, this poem kept my attention all the way through which is very good for such a long poem.

in your effort to rhyme however you have occasionally used too many syllables in a line which interrupts the flow.

-biscuit-