Very sad my lovely. Very sad. I hope everything is okay because i don't want you to hurt yourself. You have a amazing talent of writing poems. And this is yet another sad one. Hun, i'm here for you if you want to talk or need to.

But anyway this poem was sad but very good. This girl is lucky to have everything but she doesn't realizes it never does so she ended her life from something that she couldn't understand and couldn't see from.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

It is sad to hear about that, i woud be sad if i even lost any one, but they al died before my birth, that was a good poem.....5 .....

Wow, i LOVE this poem, i can relate to it really well! I definatly like the last stanza best, brilliant work 5/5
Steph