To start off, the rhyming wasnt great, but poetry doesnt have to rhyme. The rhythem was pretty good, i could follow it. I completely understood the poem! I feel the same way alot. lol 4/5

I just like to tell people why i rated what i rated them. ~Take care

Thanks for underdstanding,oh by the way i wasn't aiming for ryhming, just to get the message across, good over view