My Sister(Pygmy) Says That There Is A Weird Rhyme Scheme. Its:

ABCD
BCDE
CDEF
DEFG
-Etc-
Haha. Stupid.

xLauren3

OOO, your good, I could never do that EVER

...mia...

I liked this, i couldn't follow the rhyme scheme..i wouldn't have known there was one if you didn't say so...but i really liked your word choice and how everything flows...the last stanza is the best and you couldn't have ended it better which i think is skill because i can't end poems for anything... awesome whoever gave this a 3.0 was just jealous!! 5/5

This poem is really good. I'm sure that the rhyme scheme was difficult, but it's alright. If you want to improve it, you should just think what you're not sure about and change it.

Good job!

Keep writing.

This should have been very difficult to write with the hard rhyme scheme and all but ytou did an amazing job, you made a beautiful poem ! it's just sad that some poeple rate it low when it surely deserves a 5/5

~StefQ

The friendship, poem and form was beautiful. I am glad you took the extra time needed to write it.