This is really good... i really like this poem... i know exackly how u feel... when everyone is expecting so high of you.. and i try.. and try to put a happy face on everything... but on the inside ur dying, and u know ur kidding urself.. and its not to long till its not only on the inside that you dying... xox XxGenxX

Wow.........this actually made me a lil speachless cause i know exactly how that feels. Awsome poem...i give it a 10
much care,
Jennifer

This was soo powerful. Your writing is soo full of emotion it makes a real impact on your reader.
5/5 yet again.
xox